P5
a) Production and Editing/Contingency
d) Budget
Feedback
Test footage is strong, strong narrative and sense of story and is illustrative
Statistics should have been in test footage.
Contrasts well and has good depth.
I have updated my main focus on my story and characters, choosing to instead have the main focus be on the people affected by mental health as I feel that helps the narrative structure be more fast paced instead of focusing on facts.
I am also going to include more B-Roll as we learnt from the test footage that having the interview segments only feature the interviewees is very static and begins to dull the viewers attention
Script
Set Design
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